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Rain and My Window by ~TearDropWonder:iconTearDropWonder:



Rain and My Window

My head against the glass,
as the rain falls upon the pane.

Water runs down
leaving itself behind
forming a puddle
at my window’s base.

A small ocean, alive with gray.
Growing larger as I watch
The world is bathed in gray
as the clouds roll on.

The cool pane against my skin,
I watch in wonder.
©2005-2009 ~TearDropWonder
:iconteardropwonder:

Author's Comments

I got a little reminder of how much I do like the rain today... We had a lovely winter rainshower... storm rather with lightening and everything.... So I decided to finally post this.

And look! It's not a romantic poem... I think it falls in nature but I'm not so sure it doesn't fall into another category as well... so let me know if you think it needs moved. Thanks!

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:iconiceguerilla:
I agree that it is romantic, though unfortunately all too often, in this imperfect world, we are reminded that (speaking in the same manner as the poem) the rain stops and the sun emerges, the water evaporates and the dry ground cracks, no longer "alive".
:iconteardropwonder:
I guess that could be good and bad couldn't it? It depends on how a person looks at the rain. But it's the moment while the rain is still falling that I attempted to capture in my poem.... but somehow words never quite describe those moments just right... I just keep trying.

Thanks for the comment and thoughts!

--
I know that life is hard
but it's worth breathing.
:iconmop-closet:
um..... i liike it
sounds liike a
bored 4 yr old
u should be
DANCIN IN THE
RAIN!!! by yes
again, the reason
i commented, is to
inform u that i loved it
=)
:iconteardropwonder:
Well I'm glad you loved it... Oh I dance in the rain... that poem hasn't been posted yet.... my neighbors think I need committed because of it.

Thank you!

--
I know that life is hard
but it's worth breathing.
:iconsasalukac:
this is def one of my favorite poems :D need i say more?

--
cao!

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